Tuesday, February 9, 2010

Review on Revision

I reviewed Michelle Hensler's blog post on the classroom assignment revision. I think she has done a really good job. She has taken a mess and cleaned it up. Originally, the instructions to create a shared drive were very confusing. It was hard for me to revise especially since I don't know very much about computers. Michelle has taken the disorganized and sloppy instructions and used less words and better organization. If I needed to create a shared drive on Windows 95, I would just need to read Michelle's instructions and I will be able to do it.




http://docs.google.com/Doc?docid=0AYhrFeGQMyqtZGNwa2QzbnRfMmhiNzJrczYz&hl=en

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